The Ring

Haiku today. Let me know what you think about it. OLYMPUS DIGITAL CAMERA

The Ring

Dripping, seal-like, a gleaming mermaid emerges sand soft underfoot

suddenly, a cry “my ring is gone!” she exclaims, slipped from her finger

searchers look in vain hope for a flash in the sand it’s gone forever

Edit: It’s ironic that this week’s DP challenge is writing haiku when I just happened to post this last Friday. I’m tagging it anyway, and adding the link:…  I’ll write five more for this current week of 11-25.


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